thanks for the opinion, for me, this is few point that may be helpful:

1. Subject must be simple yet clear because this is the main point of whether your client will open the e-mail or throw them into trash without looking at it.

2. Must not have grammer or spelling problems or else they will think we are not qualified to deal with them (writing is the most basic things yet we still have mistake)

3. Send the e-mail to the correct person, if possible, do not send the e-mail to a shared e-mail address, tried to get the PIC e-mail address.

4. Do not write a long article in the e-mail, make the introduction and the main point clear because your client might not have so much time to read through long article and short & simple intro will reduce the mistake

5. make sure that your contact is clear for the client to get back to you.

6. attach photo and detailed information in the introduction of products.

Hope this help.

Yeo

Dear merry,

i wish u best in this trade,

As per as my knowledge i am most impressed by the emails that have short and to the subject information.

it should have a small description of ur experience and mastery in the field .

regards

Rajiv

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I hope you and business are both doing well.

ByTrade.com is an online B2B trade platform, where you can search or post information for your products or promote your companies. It provides most online up to date information such as sell offers, buy offers, products list, company profiles etc. It is just a business marketplace for buyers and sellers to meet together and find the right business partners.

Welcome to www.bytrade.com and have nice business. I think that it will help succeed.

i think u should given subject with good regards and should tell truth i mean should tell every good thing of ur products and also the week point to got the confidence of custumer and should not bluf in any matter should tell the truth and for the price u need to make an attractive package where u cant loss and they can get benifit .

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