Beginner English Writers Only
Post 72 of 237
Quoting from [shaymaa]:
Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Hello MR Carl iam pleased that you chose that topic to discuss it , i just have one query what should we write in it , is it can be our memo , or or daily life or any thing what we want to talk about .
as it will be embassarring for me to speak about issues may be not important to any .thank u
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Hi Shaymaa,
It's nice to hear from you here. I'm sorry to say that your post is not very good.![[em4]](http://img.alibaba.com/images/eng/style/icon/emoticons_sad.gif)
If you read the material other people have posted in this thread, you will see that at least pay attention to punctuation/spacing and correct use of capitals. They are necessary. Please rewrite with corrections.![[em1]](http://img.alibaba.com/images/eng/style/icon/emoticons_smile.gif)
If you read the material other people have posted in this thread, you will see that at least pay attention to punctuation/spacing and correct use of capitals. They are necessary. Please rewrite with corrections.20 Aug 2007 04:21
Post 73 of 237
Quoting from [Crystal518]:
Hello Professor Carl,
Thanks for your kind suggestion, can I contact you privately?
I wish you have a nice day!
Linda
I'm not sure which suggestion
. Did you get my message about this?
20 Aug 2007 04:24
Post 74 of 237
Quoting from [shaymaa]:
Replying to [Professor Carl]:hello again mr carl ,
there is some thing hit up my mind and i want to speak about it , and it will consider as practising for me , in our daily life we can see some people are very tempered and nervous should we try to speak to them gently or we should defend ourselves and try to be powefull character and what that tempered person and that nervous one is some one is close to us should we forget if they break up our emotion and let us down , or every one has some energy and may be that extra engery can disspear some day and we canot stand any more that temper and the moody persons .
thanks , shimaa
As I replied in your other post shaymaa, you have to pay attention in Beginner English Writers Only to punctuation and capitalization as a minimum. Please rewrite and make it shorter.
20 Aug 2007 04:33
Post 75 of 237
Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Hi professor Carl
I make TOEIC test and get 775 score before two months.
But my English is awful .
I can read but i can't write.
Did you have any tip for me?
Hi professor Carl
I make TOEIC test and get 775 score before two months.
But my English is awful .
I can read but i can't write.
Did you have any tip for me?
21 Aug 2007 11:18
Post 76 of 237
Quoting from [gamgre]:
Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Hi professor Carl
I make TOEIC test and get 775 score before two months.
But my English is awful .
I can read but i can't write.
Did you have any tip for me?
I have no problem understanding what you mean. But weren't you trying to say , "I took TOEIC", and don't you mean, "two months ago," instead of , "before two months"? I think that you would be able to advance quickly, but you need more work. I know you have already made a tremendous effort. You have to continue on. You'll get it!!
Are dual language books available? Those are books where when you open the book, one page is in Chinese and the other page, facing, is in English?
Are dual language books available? Those are books where when you open the book, one page is in Chinese and the other page, facing, is in English?
22 Aug 2007 04:07
Post 77 of 237
Replying to [Professor Carl]:Professor Carl is indeed an enthusiastic peopleperson.Many beginner English writers benefit from his posts. Hope more Beginner English Writers posted and mademake this post [stay] up to the top.![[em7]](http://img.alibaba.com/images/eng/style/icon/emoticons_shy.gif)
Keep my fingers crossed for everybody here especialy professor Carl. Take care (you will, right?)..
Good Job.
Many beginner English writers benefit from his posts. Hope more Beginner English Writers posted and mademake this post [stay] up to the top. Keep my fingers crossed for everybody here especialy professor Carl. Take care (you will, right?)..Good Job.
23 Aug 2007 19:28
Post 78 of 237
to cooleye:
I made a few changes in the above. Do you think your writing is improving?
24 Aug 2007 05:11
Post 79 of 237
Replying to [Professor Carl]:![[em20]](http://img.alibaba.com/images/eng/style/icon/emoticons_victory.gif){kind=icon}
Thanks for your post! but if they are not beginners yet! if he can find and use the source of platform in English language!
see below
24 Aug 2007 17:39
Post 80 of 237
Replying to [Professor Carl]: (I made a few changes in the above. Do you think your writing is improving?) Yup, thanks for your correcting Prof Carl. So far I don't think I had made a big progress, but I had noticed some rules for writing after your several reminders. (= Thanks again, and wish you an excellent weekend.
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25 Aug 2007 01:52
Post 81 of 237
Quoting from [Rattan Guy]:
Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Would you mind writing that again, in a different way? I'm not sure what you mean. Are you asking if someone can still participate in the English Corner even if they are still at a very basic level in their English writing skill? Of course they can!!
25 Aug 2007 04:27