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Hello, Dear Carl,

Thank you very much for your correction. I appreciate your generous help. Many thanks.[em15]
29 May 2007 01:47
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[em1]

Hi, everybody! My name is Pinkle, actually, if you talk with me by TM, you will find my show name is “gjs007”,gjs is our company name, maybe you will image that I’m a boy who is as mysterious and intelligent as the hero “007”,but you will surprised after I telling you that I’m a cute girl, hahahah! But I’m as intelligent as the real 007!

I have been working for a manufactory of plastic sports drink ware and hockey products as exports sales. Most of my clients are from North America and Europe; I’m enjoying my work deeply. But the big problem for me is my verbal and listening English which I’m improving, regarding my English problem, I must thank to Professor Carl Weber, he is a great scholar as well as a kindhearted member here. I just can’t wait to recommend what he’s doing in the forum to whose mother tongue is not English: http://resources.alibaba.com/topic/46336/Beginner_English_Writers_.

Hi, everybody! My name is Pinkle. Actually, if you talk with me by TM, you will find my show name is “gjs007”, Our company name is gjs. Maybe you will imagine that I’m a boy who is as mysterious and intelligent as the hero “007”, but you will be surprised after I tell you that I’m a cute girl, hahahah! But I’m as intelligent as the real 007!

I have been working in export sales for a manufacturer of plastic sports drinkware and hockey products. Most of my clients are from North America and Europe; I’m enjoying my work deeply. But the big problem for me is my verbal and listening ability with English. I’m improving. Regarding my English problem, I must thank to Professor Carl Weber, he is a great scholar as well as a kindhearted member here. I just can’t wait to recommend what he’s doing in the forum to those whose mother tongue is not English: http://resources.alibaba.com/topic/46336/Beginner_English_Writers_.

I made a few minor corrections to the post of Chinese Bond, Pinkle.

  I think posts of this length might serve better if they were shorter, so readers would be able to follow the minor corrections. (Exceptions will be made regarding lengthy praise for the moderator.

29 May 2007 19:07
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Grace Tung
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Dear Professor Carl, it's a good and helpful topic, how can I contact with you privately? Can you add my TM?

Dear Professor Carl,
It's a good and helpful topic. How can I make contact with you privately? Can you add my TM?
Done

30 May 2007 00:22
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Professor Carl :
i'm a new user of alibaba forum , and i'm also a new member entering into the international trade . i am so thirsty to learn English well . what suggestions do you provide for me learnling English ! your pay attention will be appreciate very much ! waiting for your suggestions .

Professor Carl :

I'm a new user of Alibaba forum, and I'm also a new member entering into international trade. I am so thirsty to learn English well . What suggestions can you provide for me for learning English? Your paying attention will be appreciated very much! Waiting for your suggestions...

 For writing, learn a respect for conventional rules of capitalization, puctuation and spacing.
There will be an opportunity to go into more detail.
30 May 2007 01:19
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Pinkle
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Dear Carl,thank you so much for the correction.As a reward,I'm promoting your program to my friends and other Chinese who is learning English,[em1]

Dear Carl,
Thank you so much for the corrections. As a reward, I'm promoting your program to my friends and other Chinese who are learning English,[em24]
...spacing after periods and commas; "are" is plural for "friends and other Chinese?
31 May 2007 19:19
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Thanks for the kind words...

Professor Carl , Thank you very much for your attention ! I am so honoured that you had examined my content and marked the mistakes ! And your suggestions for writing is good for me too .I will accept and following from now on ! Thanks again , and thanks very must . Give my best regards


—honeymoon

Professor Carl,
Thank you very much for your attention! I am so honoured that you had examined my content and marked the mistakes! And your suggestions for writing are good for me too. I will accept and follow them from now on! Thanks again, and thanks very much.


Best Regards,



—honeymoon

31 May 2007 23:15
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I make a obvious mistake in last posting . and now i want to correct it by this chance . In last issuing's content , i said " thanks very much " into "thanks very must " . That is a obvious mistake . so i must correct it . That's all !

I made an obvious mistake in the last posting. and now I want to correct it by this change. In my last posting's content, I said for, "thanks very much," "thanks very must." That is an obvious mistake. So I must correct it. That's all !

31 May 2007 23:31
Post 29 of 237
Dear Professor Carl:



You are a so hot-heated man for us . The English Corner also is a good program for us to improve our English level. As a beginner, we can practice writing in here,we can learn some new words in here, and we also can study some conventional rules of capitalization, puctuation and spacing ect. It's good for us.I think more and more English beginners will be attracted to enter into this forum. I hope more excellent topics can be issued which not noly can learn something , but also can make more friends from topics discussing .Can i reach my hopeness ?

Best Regards![em14]

—honeymoon[em28]
Thanks Honeymoon,
The periods and commas do not have spaces before them. It's obvious that you are very serious about learning English. That may have a part to play in your attaining your goals.

01 Jun 2007 18:30
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Professor Carl]



I like the "professor"smiley very much,could you teach me how to make it in the text?



Acctually,it bring a comic dialogue in idiom of Hunan province in China to my mind,I can give you a link if you are interested in it(acctually,Hunan province is my hometown).

Thanks Pinkle,


Paste the following in your html code, or put it in the address line of your browser.

http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_18.gif
When you finish writing, go though what you wrote and check your periods and commas. Send me the link.
01 Jun 2007 20:23
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Replying to [Professor Carl]:


Dear Carl,


I am sorry that I don't [I didn't] know this topic till now. It is a good way for us to improve our written English. We thank you for your time.[em55]


This morning, I joined in the "SKYPE English corner", but there is something wrong with my earphone, when you called[call] me, so that you can not hear me.[sapce here]What a pity!


I am poor in my oral English, and eager to make progress. You give us a good chance to speak it out. I am not nervous, because you can't see me if I made mistakes ^@^[em2] I expect the next cl *.


Best regards

Ruby
Your writing is good, and destined to get better.

02 Jun 2007 04:00
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