Do you know what I mean by "rewrite this in the third person"?

Note that he said, "I am joy..." He should have said, "my name is Joy" or "I am Joy."

The number one difficulty I come across with wonderful people like you, who practice so hard for years, is you have not had the confidence building experience of talking with speakers who's mother tongue is English. Perhaps in the near future we can have real time (live) audio/video communication. Meanwhile, keep writing to Beginner English Writers Only, and I will suggest corrections.

Did you get the message I sent you with my email?
(This person did get in touch with me.)

Hi, professor Carl, How can i send my writing to you privately?
Hi, Professor Carl, how can I send my writing to you privately?

Again: Did you get the message I sent you with my email?
(Things are working out well. Big Sea got my email.)

There is so much material available on the Internet for this, for your request. If you write something, I can provide suggested corrections for you. What the great number of people would benefit from most is real time conversation with a native English speaker. Do you have Skype? That is free software that individuals can talk in real time with.

That's fine! But I am afraid that maybe you haven't enough time to deal with these things.

Thanks for the concern. Please explain.

Professor Carl: "Post it and it will be corrected" - You are using italic type too much.
I'm using a typeface called Comic Sans. Thanks for heads up.

Professor Carl:

I'm an export sales in China,I have been learning English years by myself,but,I find that the most difficult thing for me is expressing in precise words and phrases.

I'm in export sales in China. I have been learning English for years by myself. I find that the most difficult thing for me is expressing in precise words and phrases.

You did pretty well here. The problems are minor. I would guess that you are talkinga about verbal abilities.

Dear Professor Carl,yes,acctually,my shortage in verbal is obvious,and even more,my listening ability is worse.I just don't know how to improve them.When I talk with who's English-mother-language,I could catch their meaning hardly other than few words. And,my vocabulary is very limited.

Dear Professor Carl,

Yes, actually my shortage of verbal skills is obvious, and even more, my listening ability is worse. I just don't know how to improve them. When I talk with someone who's mother tongue is English, I can hardly catch their meaning, other than a few words, and my vocabulary is very limited.

It's nice for me to be in touch with you again, Pinkle. You do need a lot of study and practice. For your information, anybody who reads English would be able to understand every idea you wrote. Talk to you later. 

Pinkle Replying to Professor Carl's

Request for Writing to Be Corrected

We seeing your selling leads and knew that you are an excellent supplier of sports bags.
We saw your selling leads and know that you are an excellent supplier of sports bags.

Nowadays, there are more and more European and North American company order plastic bottle from us to sell bags accompany with it as a kits, for example: backpack+ sports bottle=outdoor kits etc.. There is a good market for these kits and the demand is steadily on the increase, we are sure that you can sell more by this idea.
There are more and more European and North American companies ordering plastic bottles from us to sell with their backpacks. There is a good market for this combination, and the demand is steadily on the increase. We are sure that including one of our plastic bottles with your backpacks will improve your sales.

We are a manufactury for plastic sports water bottle in China. Our products have two outlets, one is just for sports purpose, and another one is sold as accessories or promotional of bag or other sporting goods.
We are a manufacturer of plastic sports water bottles in China. Our products have two main uses. One is just for sports purposes. The other is for use as an accessory or for sporting goods promotions.

For your reference, here we enclose one of our newest design, it's made of strong PC which can resist -120-120 Celsius degree and with out odor nor leakage, it comes with a clip to be attached to bags.
For your reference, we are enclosing one of our newest designs. It's made of strong PC which can resist heat up to 120 degrees (Celsius) without odor or leakage, It comes with a clip to be attached to bags.

We can discuss further details when you have a thorough knowledge of the marketing possibilities, let increase the sale of your products and create a win-win business goal
We can discuss further details when you have a thorough knowledge of the marketing possibilities, Let's increase the sale of your products and create a win-win business goal.