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Professor Carl Moderator
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This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please).

Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

 

 

 

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  • 23 May 2007 10:52
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    jooooooy7
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    Replying to [Professor Carl]: hi really wanna learn powerful english..... i have many things to share while discussion but cant express them...... i know much but i cant say it at times....... whould really appreciate your help as i am call centre agent and need to be good at any cost..........

    Dear Professor Carl,

    I really want to learn powerful English. I have many things to share in discussion but can’t express them. I know a lot but can’t say it at times. I would really appreciate your help, as I am a call centre agent and need to be good at any cost.

    (The text has been rewritten and put into a more formal presentation. When we speak in a friendly way we say "wanna," "gotta" and our speech flows. When writing, however, it is often necessary to be able to write formally. Please write the best you can with proper punctuation, capitalization, etc. Do your best, the corrections will be made. Speaking is what you really want to practice, right? If you and others are interested, we will create a weekly audio/video classroom.)

    23 May 2007 15:53
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    Professor Carl Moderator
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    As mentioned to jooooooy7, please practice writing your best English. Keep it simple, but challenge yourself. Correction will be made and posted. To repeat, the goal is to set up a real time learning condition.
    23 May 2007 18:49
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    Professor Carl Moderator
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    We all make mishtakes...

    23 May 2007 19:43
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    Replying to [Professor Carl]:

    thank you very much,good idea,man,hope things go well,and best wishes:)

    Thank you very much. Good idea, man. I hope things go well, and best wishes:)


    23 May 2007 20:36
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    Replying to [Professor Carl]:Great..!! Prof. Carl's [em19]..Keep up the Tempo !
    24 May 2007 00:32
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    Replying to [jooooooy7]:I object to the words..'Wanna'..&...'Gotta'..( for beginners..at least ) these are slang words....and should be spoken as ''Want to''..& ''Got to''..for beginners..Sorry, to barge in.

    Regards / AdseaCo

    I object to the words, "wanna" and "gotta" (for beginners, at least). These are slang words and should be spoken as, "want to" and "have to," for beginners. Sorry to barge in.

    Barge on in! Spoken language has differences from written language. Beginners should know the difference between these two levels and how to use them. Slang and casual uses have their place. In spoken language "going to" and "want to" often sound stiff. But in writing business letters, you gotta use 'em.

    24 May 2007 00:46
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    Let's practice , make it perfect.[em7]

    Not bad. (No space before the comma, please.)The idiomatic expression is, "practice makes perfect." You might also say, "Let's practice and make it perfect," or, "Let us practice and make it perfect," or "Let's practice and let's make it perfect." There are many right ways to say just about the same thing, and many many many ways to say the wrong thing.

    24 May 2007 01:46
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    Replying to [Professor Carl]:HELLO PROF

    WHAT KIND BOOK AND AUDIO TO IMPROVE ENGLISH . I M, NEW IN STATE THANKS PROF

    Hello Professor,
    What kind of books and audio [do I need] to improve my English. I'm [I am] new in the States.
    Thanks Professor

    I think this is what you had in mind. There are many many sources for these things on the Internet. Watch your plural -s when needed. What all my beginner English students need is a live native English speaker to practice with. Maybe soon we can be live in real time, audio/video.
    24 May 2007 08:45
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    Replying to [Professor Carl]: hi prof . ido not have powerful english .but ithink that real business in best teacher plus the real teachers of english

    Hello Professor,
    I do not have strengths in English. I think that the business of learning English is to have the best teacher, one who is a native-English speaker.

    This would be close to what you wanted to say. Maybe soon we can be live in real time, audio/video. Watch the capitalization rules.
    24 May 2007 09:40
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    Replying to [adseaco]: thanks for barging........ c u latta..........

    Thanks for barging. See you later.

    Try to put on your best suit of English clothing in Beginner English Writers Only.  Phrases like "c u latta" are not uncool; they are just uncool here. (Wink/smile.)
    24 May 2007 10:05
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