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Quoting from [patty9703]:

 

Dear friend:

Thank you for your correction.

I am sorry to say , but i think you are totally mixed up what I really want to say

Quoting from [patty9703]:

Dear friend:

Thank you for your correction.


I am sorry to say , but i think you are totally mixed up what I really want to say

You need not be sorry!!

You need to express yourself in a manner where the reader can understand and comprehend your thoughts, views and ideas.

If you fail in such an endeavour, you have failed miserably to communicate your thoughts.

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I'm glad that I actually have a chance to correct my writing.

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

Dear Professor Carl ,

     I am Anny  from China.I am intrested in English,but i dont have confidence to talk out.

     Today i meet you and your english corner,i am very glad!There are many friends we can chat and learn english each other.

     I want to talk out the english ,but i dont know how to do .Hoping you can give sugesstions.

     Looking forward for you !

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

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ZEC has built up fruitful business in more than 30 countries worldwide Incl. ,,, ,,,
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Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

Dear porfessor Carl,

Frankly speaking , I think  learing English is a difficlt thing, no matter spoken English, listening or writting. I started learing English from my high school, but I  dont dare to speak with  my classmates and teachers. And I  also dont like to write, because I dont know how to express my  inner feeling in words, and my vocabulary is also not enough. My teacher told me to express using simple words and sentences, right? Another problem, I love listening Engish songs, but I can follow the steps, specially there are many linking and skim. And my pronunciation is not very correct. I konw many tips on English learing, but little effect for my own reasons.

Now, I deal with foreign trde, sometimes I must  answer bussiness letters ,I  hope it can help me to inprove my English.

Quoting from [furuichina]:

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

I would like to briefly introduce our company first, “ZEC Group Co.,ltd” w/ISO 9001/2000 certificate, is a specialized manufacturing and exporting company in the field of skiing and tour products over 8 years, supplying high quality product into kinds of match and brand markets. Our products have One-Year Warranty period, which are product quality endorsement and commitment to its valued customers. We also guarantee parts availability after purchase assured customers of lifetime support for their quality ZEC product.

 

 

 

 

ZEC has built up fruitful business in more than 30 countries worldwide Incl. ,,, ,,,

…etc. We have confidence to provide you satisfied and prompt service such as on time delivery and technical support.

 

 

 

 

 

We have complete programs to satisfy our customer’s request. You are welcome to access our website www.furuichina.com for more information. If there are models in the web you may have interests, please don’t hesitate to let me know.

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

Quoting from [reigger]:



i want to imporve my english too,though i have learn it for several years,but i think i learn it with out backround, and the most i want to learn is the grammar,usually,i said the words with many grammar-error,i am sorry for that, i don't like to learn at the school ,after leave school,i know i have no chance to learn it centralized.


thank you if you can help .

Have you tried finding a friendly on-line group to participate in? Are you perhaps nervous about that? Don't be, because as I'm sure you know, most people the world over are friendly.