This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

 

 

 

i want to imporve my english too,though i have learn it for several years,but i think i learn it with out backround, and the most i want to learn is the grammar,usually,i said the words with many grammar-error,i am sorry for that, i don't like to learn at the school ,after leave school,i know i have no chance to learn it centralized.
thank you if you can help .

Just now I had posted a few English words in Forums , but I found I have made mistakes, just so easy word ,because i am so careless !

Replying to [Professor Carl]:We all make mistakes ,no one can escape from it.Chinese English is more funny

Quoting from [reigger]:


i want to imporve my english too,though i have learn it for several years,but i think i learn it with out backround, and the most i want to learn is the grammar,usually,i said the words with many grammar-error,i am sorry for that, i don't like to learn at the school ,after leave school,i know i have no chance to learn it centralized.

thank you if you can help .

Have you tried finding a friendly on-line group to participate in? Are you perhaps nervous about that? Don't be, because as I'm sure you know, most people the world over are friendly.

Replying to [Professor Carl]:
please help fix our label:replace the fellowing part numbers

many thanks

Hi, Professor

It's Peter from Wenzhou, China. Long time no see. I have changed my ID,  because my old ID had been recognized as a spam. So bad luck!!

Sincerely yours,

Peter Zhou

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

Quoting from [shaymaa]:



Replying to [Professor Carl]:



Hello MR Carl iam pleased that you chose that topic to discuss it , i just have one query what should we write in it , is it can be our memo , or or daily life or any thing what we want to talk about .




as it will be embassarring for me to speak about issues may be not important to any .thank u
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Hi Shaymaa,

It's nice to hear from you here. I'm sorry to say that your post is not very good. If you read the material other people have posted in this thread, you will see that at least pay attention to punctuation/spacing and correct use of capitals. They are necessary. Please rewrite with corrections.

The above reply shows how shallow and inconsiderate you are; they write and you say "Not very good". The fact that they have taken the time and overcome their nervousness is only to be commendable.

Maybe you should concentrate on your own level of "English" period? =Full stop, over use of !!!!  I could go on but what is the point.

The first rule of written communication for non-natives of English, is no spelling mistakes.... ( It gives  the impression of not caring).

Try this website: www.mantex.co.uk   a free e-book  that sits on your desktop and is called 'Improve your writing skills'

Please kindly correct it for me.Thank you.

Part 1

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Part 2

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Quoting from [patty9703]:

Please Kindly correct (this) it for me.Thank you.

Part 1

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