This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

 

 

 

Replying to [Professor Carl]:Dear Mr Carol:
Thanks for your reply.I am a chinese and a green hand in the forum.I worked as an English teacher for 3 years after graduating from college,so ,I forgot many English words.My spoken English is not so good.I want to know if you have time that I can talk with you by micrphone.Thanks very much!

Best regards
Yanshen Yu

Quoting from [kang dudu]:



Replying to [Professor Carl]:Dear Mr Carol:


Thanks for your reply.spaceI am a chinese and a green hand in the forum.I worked as an English teacher for 3 years after graduating from college,so ,I forgot many English words.My spoken English is not so good.I want to know if you have time that I can talk with you by micrphone.Thanks very much!


Best regards


Yanshen Yu
see below

Quoting from [Professor Carl]:

Quoting from [kang dudu]:



Replying to [Professor Carl]:Dear Mr Carol:


Thanks for your reply.spaceI am a chinese and a green hand in the forum.I worked as an English teacher for 3 years after graduating from college,so ,I forgot many English words.My spoken English is not so good.I want to know if you have time that I can talk with you by micrphone.Thanks very much!


Thanks for your reply.spaceI am a Cchinese and a green hand in the forum.spaceI worked as an English teacher for 3 years after graduating from college,spaceso ,spaceI forgot many English words.spaceMy spoken English is not so good.spaceI want to know if you have time that I can talk with you by micrphone.spaceThanks very much!



Best regards


Yanshen Yu

You DO have a microphone?   good. CAN YOU SEND ME A  message specifically mentioning the words "Alibaba English Forum"? I get a lot of messages I have to not allow because I would be swamped. When someone sends a message with no information, and they just say "hi, I would like to contact"... it is not good enough, I need a reference. Best regards to you too, Yanshen.


Do you have a Skype name?

Replying to [Professor Carl]:Dear Mr Carol:
Thanks for your reply. I am sorry I don't have Skyp, but I have MSN. My MSN: bangzhu32322@hotmail.com

Hope to talk with you on MSN
Best wishes

Quoting from [kang dudu]:


Replying to [Professor Carl]:Dear Mr Carol:

Thanks for your reply. I am sorry I don't have Skyp, but I have MSN. My MSN: bangzhu32322@hotmail.com


Hope to talk with you on MSN

Best wishes

And I'm sorry, I don't have an MSN account, and have been unable to correct a long standing problem to get an account with them. .. professor Carl

Replying to [Professor Carl]:I am a english learner and very glad to come here ,Thank you very much ,professor carl .it is very fun ,i think .


I don't know how to improve my English ,especially hearing .i was alway puzzle when foreigner speak to me very quickly .


I have another question :everyday because of work necessary ,we must face to computer ,day by day ,my eye seems become worse .

See reply below. (By the way, your English writing is very poor... you should read what has been written in previous posts about spacing and punctuation and capitalization. If you were in my English classroom I would give you a failing grade, smile at you, and tell you to write it again.)

Replying to [Professor Carl]:

Nice to meet you here professor Carl,I graduated from univetsity this July and I have been working in the filed of foreign trade for nearly 2 months.as we known ,both written and spoken English is very necessary in this foreign.though I started learning English from Middle school ,as we haven't been taught by foreign teachers,I can't speak English exactly .would you please give me some advices to improve my oral English?thank you ver much!

Replying to [Professor Carl]:

Dear professor Carl

How are you ?I am really very glad to chat with you on trademanager today!

I am Cherry from China.5months ago ,I graduated from the university.law is my major which I don't like .I like English so much that I made a decision to find a work in the filed of foreign trade.however ,realism is very cruel.many companies refused me because I am not the English or international business major.those days were very dull to me,what is worse ,I am in a unknown city(suzhou city),though it is a very beautiful city ,I thought it never belonged to me.

After more than 2months ,I find a job at last .though it is a small company and has long time work,I am still very happy and very grateful for my boss giving me this chance.

My object is to be an execllent foreign trade saler.English is very important in this filed.if you don't have fluent English it is really very hard to communicate with the clients.and now my problem is that sometimes I can't follow the clients and I can't express myself exactly.what is worse ,I misunderstaned what my customer mean and made some mistakes.would you pls give me some advices to improve my listening and speaking English?I will be very grateful if you give me a reply!

Now I am more familar with Suzhou city ,there are many beautiful and historic places.and it is the hometown of water in Chinese.

would you like China .welcome to here if you have much spare time.and I am very glad to be your guide!

Best regards

Cherry

Quoting from [hellen1983]:



Replying to [Professor Carl]:I am a english learner and very glad to come here ,Thank you very much ,professor carl .it is very fun ,i think .


I don't know how to improve my English ,especially hearing .i was alway puzzle when foreigner speak to me very quickly .


I have another question :everyday because of work necessary ,we must face to computer ,day by day ,my eye seems become worse .

Hellen...Send me a request for contact on an offline message. I am trying to find people here to be able to talk live with people in China. Make sure you say you are Helen and you exchanged with me on the English forum.

Quoting from [Cherry Deng]:




Replying to [Professor Carl]:



Nice to meet you here professor Carl,I graduated from univetsity this July and I have been working in the filed of foreign trade for nearly 2 months.as we known ,both written and spoken English is very necessary in this foreign.though I started learning English from Middle school ,as we haven't been taught by foreign teachers,I can't speak English exactly .would you please give me some advices to improve my oral English?thank you ver much!