This is for beginners to practice writing English. Post it and it will be corrected (less than 100 words please). Let's try this “Beginner English Writers Only” for a while. It's a friendly place for beginners to come to and have their writing corrected and posted for other to learn from.

 

 

 

Hello Dear Professor Carl, How are thing going recently? I haven't come here for several days, because I'm very busy. But I don't know why although I was busy, I tried my best, the result still let me down. Almost two months I haven't got any order now. I don't know where the problem is. I feel the pressure above me becomes heavier and heavier.


Weekend is coming. Hope you have a nice weekend.

Yesterday is the Thanksgiving Day, I'm sorry for forgetting to send you and your family my warm wishes.



P.S. Dear professor Carl, does the word "family" really comes from the first letter of each word in this sentence "Father And Mother I Love You"?
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Quoting from [Sophia Lee]:


Replying to [Professor Carl]:Hi,SPACEProfessor Carl,SPACEglad to meet you.SPACEI want to improve my english,SPACEbut I am afraid of making mistakes.SPACEI don't know how to express my heart and how to overcome my thoughts.SPACEI am really sad about this.SPACEWhat should I do?

Replying to [Professor Carl]:Hi,SPACEProfessor Carl,SPACEglad to meet you.SPACEI want to improve my CAPITAL E in "English" english,SPACEbut I am afraid of making mistakes.SPACEI don't know how to express my heart and how to overcome my thoughts.SPACEI am really sad about this.SPACEWhat should I do?

Are there any places available where you can go and speak with native English speakers? That's the best of all worlds. You write well, but why do you leave the spaces out? In English, the names of languages are always capitalized.

Quoting from [Miles Xiong]:


Hello Dear Professor Carl, How are thing going recently? I haven't come here for several days, because I'm very busy. But I don't know why although I was busy, I tried my best, the result still let me down. Almost two months I haven't got any order now. I don't know where the problem is. I feel the pressure above me becomes heavier and heavier.


Weekend is coming. Hope you have a nice weekend.

Yesterday is the Thanksgiving Day, I'm sorry for forgetting to send you and your family my warm wishes.


P.S. Dear professor Carl, does the word "family" really comes from the first letter of each word in this sentence "Father And Mother I Love You"?

The "family" origin theory is one I've not heard.YOU should learn how to check word histories. Some words raise problems, but nearly all of them have histories that are well documented. You tell me, what is the origin of the word. Your English writing is easy to understand, but you should try harder to eliminate the common mistakes. It appears that you are writing spontaneously. Go back and read carefully what you write -- you will write differently for the customer than for the teacher.

Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Hello Dear Professor Carl, How are thing going? I haven't come here for several days, because I was very busy. Though I was busy and tried my best, but I don't know why the result still let me down. I haven't got any order for almost two months. I don't know where the problem is. I feel the pressure above me becomes heavier and heavier.

Dear Professor Carl, Tks for your kind advice. I'll remember it.

Replying to [Professor Carl]:Hi,Professor Carl.I have learned English for several years ,but I can't express myself smoothly.How can I come over this issue?
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Vickyxu

Quoting from [vickyxu]:


Replying to [Professor Carl]:Hi,Professor Carl.spaceI have learned English for several years no spaceI ,spaceIbut I can't express myself smoothly.spaceIHow can I come over this issue?

B&R

Vickyxu

You mean in spoken English, don't you? Do you want to try something new? Can you post to YouTube? Can you put a video up there with a private access so only I can see it when you send me the address? If you didn't know, making a video is very easy with a simple web cam. DO IT, AND TALK TO ME. (Or is this too complicated?)

Replying to [Professor Carl]:
Professor Carl,It’s pleasure to receive your reply.In fact,both my spoken English and written English are poor. I am in my office,so it’s pity that I can’t put a video up here with a private access.Instead I can post email or communicate with others by MSN.Here is my email address:fairybo11@hotmail.com.I’d like to receive some suggestions about written English from you.Hope all of you everything is well.
Vicky

Replying to [Professor Carl]:dear sir

glad to see you in the froum ,my english is very poor,and i want to improve my english.could you give me some advice?


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Quoting from [kang dudu]:


Replying to [Professor Carl]:dear sir


glad to see you in the froum ,my english is very poor,and i want to improve my english.could you give me some advice?

It's always good to find some English speakers to practice with. Are there any available to you? You should get in the habit, especially when writing to an English teacher, of using accepted punctuation and capitalization. Can you see all the errors in this regard you made in your post?

Replying to [Professor Carl]:

Hi, Professor, I can understand what's the errors of the Kang Dudu's posting, we always write the informal or some wrong written English when we start our English posting. Kang Dudu is a green hand who entered into the international trade just a few weeks. When she ask me some suggestions about how learn her English well, I suggest her to visit your topic to search for help. Because I know very well, our Professor Carl always kind hearted to all of the members who posting for help. Good luck!

Best Regards!

Peter Zhou